"Home Makeover" was written by P&F's story editor, Scott Peterson, and has all the hallmarks of a solid, entertaining story! I love the opening page and the total panel-to-panel storytelling throughout is clear, concise and fun! The final color job was superb as well!
The one addition I added that wasn't in Scott's original script was Perry suddenly appearing in the last panel of the comic as I figured he would have just arrived back home after defeating Doof. "Oh, Perry, there you are!" was what I was going for as he appeared out of nowhere.
The only thing I wish was that they used bigger a bigger font and word balloon, but all comics seem to use a smaller font these days.
Anyway, here is the whole story for your enjoyment!
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